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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2016 19:08:01 GMT -5
Okay so working on the battle right now.. Might have it up tomorrow evening.
But for now it is time.
It is time for the bump that is really sick of the snow and can't wait for spring.
Info Bump (rocks head from side to side)
To day we take a closer look at Zack. You know its March spring baby spring is almost here.
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Name; Zack
Age; 20
Gender; Male
Race; Human
Likes; Training, Raman, testing his strength, and well it's a secret but its connected to the wish that hes hoping to get from Starlow
Dislikes; Laziness
Fears; He is awfully shy around woman (wait what do you mean that sounds like Lon'qu......)
Personality; Cold, calm, collected, secretly shy
Bio;
Not much is known about Zack. The only thing he is willing to say is that he is a wondering swordsman traveling the land looking to hone his skills. He was traveling through Toad town one day when he heard that the princess was kidnapped. Zack at first thought nothing of it until he noticed the reward on the fler.
For the princess's safe return anything you could ever wish for will come true, if interested come and talk to Starlow at Peach's Castle.....
Sign,
Starlow
Zack not only seeing this as a chance to test his skills but for a chance to get his greatest wish granted. Whenever somebody asks what that wish is he automatically, goes silence. What secrets does Zack hold? What is this wish he really wants granted? How does a Myrmoid know lock touch? Will he get over his shyness around woman to successfully be shipped with Ann, Sophie, Rosalina???
Fun Fact;
Zack came about when I was thinking which FE character I wanted to introduce as the swordsman/ swordswoman. Then I just figured why not just make him an OC also. Does that mean that Ann, Sophie, and Zack are the only three original characters? No, because I actually like the idea of OC being introduced into as set structure. Also it allows for a certain freedom that you normally don't get when using an established character. It doesn't mean that I am cutting out already established characters. In fact for most of act one the chapters revolve around a particular character. Who those characters are will be revealed after ch.1.
Hope to have the battle tomorrow. Hopefully, you guys as enjoying the reboot along with the unique intros to the different characters
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Post by Deleted on Feb 4, 2016 19:11:51 GMT -5
"Well who do we have here?" Rosalina asked.
"Oh this fellow over here, his name is Zack and he was so amazing," Ann said while practically swooning over him.
"I wasn't that amazing," Zack said while blushing.
"Yeah Mama Rosalina, this gentleman is named Zack and he was decent until this big hammer head dude showed up and tripped him up," Sophie said playfully taunting Zack.
"He got lucky that's all," Zack sighed still blushing.
"Well it looks like my girls took a liking to you, welcome aboard Zack," Rosalina said to Zack.
"Hello Ms. Rosalina," Starlow said to Rosalina.
"Hm a star spirit, what brings you here?" Rosalina asked. "
Well it is a long story but to keep things short Peach was kidnapped by Bowser again," Starlow sighed. "You know the story Mario shows up and handles everything," Starlow continued. "Yet, Mario hasn't been seen in ages, I had to recruit people to help, and only Zack here answered the notice," Starlow said.
"Hmm looks like our mission just became a rescue mission," Rosalina said. "Before we decide what to do next let's take care of the minions inside first," Rosalina said.
"So what's the plan?" Ann asked.
"Me and DK will take lead since we can take the most punishment," Sophie said as DK nodded in approval.
"Ann and I will take the center, and support DK and Sophie from the rear," Rosalina said.
"What about me?" Zack asked.
"You can guard our rears .... I mean you can guard us from the rear and make sure no one tries to sneak attack us," Ann said.
"Umm umm umm ok," Zack stammered out.
"If I didn't know better, I think somebody has a crush on Ann," Starlow whispered to a flustered Zack.
With the plan in place Donkey Kong and Sophie slowly opened the front door to Bowser's castle
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Post by Deleted on Feb 13, 2016 18:45:38 GMT -5
BGM: General Encounter (Never Let Up! M&L Dream Team)
As soon as the doors to Bowser Gates open DK, Sophie, and Ann immediately took out the three goombas in front of them. Rosalina and Zack held fast and kept on alert and ready to counterattack if they had to. "Hey hey losers calm down I think Mario is gone now," Henry called out to the minions. "Hey when did you guys get here," Henry asked Sophie and the group. "Well it doesn't matter Goomba squad get them," Henry said as the goombas attacked DK and Zack.
"Are you guys ok?" Sophie asked.
"I am fine these guys are surprisingly soft," Zack replied as DK grunted in response.
"Well that's good to here," Sophie said in relief. "DK you ready?" Sophie asked as her and DK took care of the remaining two goombas.
"Rosalina ready?" Ann asked as they raised a pair of Shine tomes enveloping the two koopa troopas.
"Zack ready?" Starlow chuckled as Zack just sighed and let loose a couple of sword strikes towards a single target.
"Sir we're taking heavy damage down here," one of the Koopa Troopas called out.
"Sigh, you can't even handle a few non Mario people, hey you two start advancing towards the group," Henry bemoaned as he called out towards the two hammer head assistants.
The five koopa troopas which were present decided to take action, only for three of them to harmlessly bouncing off DK. A couple of the Koopa troopas wised up and instead started charging Sophie. One of them ended up attacking Sophie while the other ended up attacking Rosalina. "Ouch these guys actually kind of hurt," Sophie said.
"If you are complaining about these little minions, you might as well go ahead and go home little girl," Zack replied in a smug matter.
"Oh really little girl," Sophie said as she planted her ax into a Koopa Troopa dropping it right there.
"Heh not bad, watch this," Zack said as he sliced up another Koopa Troopa. Donkey Kong feeling left out of the action practically, lifted a Koopa Troopa and tossed him into one of the walls.
"Hey don't forget about me," Ann said raising her time into the air defeating another Koopa Troopa.
"Watch this," Rosalina called out as a bright light enveloped one of the hammer heads
"Run, run," the last remaining Koopa Troopa cried out as he ran into Donkey Kong.
"For the love of Koopa," Henry facepalmed.
The two hammer head minions took position and unleashed a barrage of hammers towards the group. Sophie was not paying attention and was almost hit by a hammer until Zack shoved her out of the way in the process getting hit by the hammer.
"Zack," Sophie called out in a panic.
"Don't worry I can heal... eep," Ann squealed as she was also struck by a hammer. Another hammer was on its way towards striking Ann, but Donkey Kong swatted that hammer out of the air and gave Ann a mushroom.
"Ann, Zack are you guys okay?" Sophie asked extremely worried about both of them.
"Yeah we are fine," Ann said while healing Zack's wound.
"You two were careless, if you hope to make it out of here in one piece, you have better pay attention to what's going on around you" Zack scolded both Sophie and Ann.
"You big jerk, I was just trying to help," Ann wanted to slap Zack but Sophie stopped her.
"No it's fine Ann we needed to hear this," Sophie said to Ann.
"Zack is right we were getting way too cocky with ourselves, and that cockiness could have cost us our lives," Sophie told Ann, and Zack.
"Zack thank you for your criticism, from now on we promise to be more careful," Sophie said in a serious tone.
"Wow you must really like him," Ann teased Sophie.
"Its not like that at all," Sophie blurted out her face as red as the lava surrounding Bowser's castle.
"Sigh glad to see you two are back to normal," Rosalina said to Ann and Sophie. "She started it," Ann and Sophie said pointing towards one another.
"Not to be that person but we still have a few minions left," Starlow reminded everyone as they started to take care of the remaining minions
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Post by Deleted on Feb 13, 2016 18:54:38 GMT -5
Right let's finish the mission first," Ann said as the group decided to finish off the remaining minions. Sophie took care of the remaining Koopa Troopa with a swift strike. While Zack finished off the already weakened Hammer Head. Rosalina unleashed a Shine spell to the healthy Hammer Head, sealing him significantly.
"Boss we can't take much more," the lone hammer head panted. "We can still do this pull yourself together," Henry called out. "Um sir look," Tim called out in a panic as he just started chucking hammers out of fear. Tim did manage to catch Sophie with a couple of hammers but she shrugged them off as she landed a finishing blow on Tim. Henry realizing he was completely outnumbered tried to make run for it. Only to run into the blunt end of Donkey Kong's lance. Ann and Zack followed up with a couple of strikes of their own. As Rosalina finished off Henry with a blast of her Shine spell.
End Battle
With that final blast Henry fell and the minions were defeated. "So how is everybody doing?" Rosalina asked. Everybody nodded there head indicating that they were okay. "That's good we earned a bit of breather if you want to chat and catch up on what's going on," Rosalina told the group. With those words the group separated.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 28, 2016 20:06:31 GMT -5
(Posting here just to let everyone know i haven't forgot bringing over the full cyoa )
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 22:37:34 GMT -5
Crud I haven't updated over here since March. Geez soery about that well good news I am done Ch.2 and updating the cyoa like crazy over at the Verse. I still wanma do a dual site cyoa.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 22:41:50 GMT -5
like there is no change coming. So will go ahead and lock in the supports and you guys choose to advance the story. But for now it is time........
It is time for the bump that thankful you rescued it but is sad to tell you your princess is in another castle.
Info Bump
Today we will take a look at Bow.....
BGM; Bowser's Theme (Mario Party 10)
(unfortunately w/ added sound effects)
Gwa ha ha no need to go on tiny man I got it from here. Umm okay. Now its time for
Bowser's Info Bump
Name; Bowser obviously
Age; Doesn't matter
Gender; All Bowser (Male)
Personality; Obnoxious, Stubborn as a mule, very ummm loud, head strong, reckless, and those are his good qualities (Hey I could have said all that if I wanted to just didn't want to that's all)
Bio; As the almighty king of the Koopas I am the story. That's all I have to say. (Sigh)
Okay for those of you who don't know Bowser well, he is the main antagonist in the Mario universe. Lord knows how many times Mario and Luigi had to go on a quest to save Peach from Bowser. Yet, bolieve it or not there has been times Mario and Luigi had to team up to take on a greater threat. Also despite the history between Mario and Bowser they been known to put their differences to party (or in Bowser's case crash the party), golf, go karting, etc.
Now at first Bowser will start as the antagonist but eventually he will join the party regardless how much the party protests. Surely, nothing can go wrong right? One more question how can anyone trust or get along with Bowser and is he really joining to help the group or for some other reason? Maybe hes joining them because he has no choice given the threat but he would never admit he needs the help.
Fun Fact; I know I said Bowser would join after the first chapter but after much consideration I made a small change. Instead he will join after you defeat him in ch.5. The reason is there is no way of A.) Having to jack up everybody's level to get to his level, B.) Making the boksses and encounters balanced so that Bowser isn't steam rolling everyone, or that the foes aren't steamrolling everybody but Bowser. C.) Turning Bowser into a glorified Jegan type character.
So what's going to happen to Bowser in the mean time??? Well during Ch.1-4 that's when POV switches to Bowser a la Paper Mario; TYD. Those will continue until he eventually, joins in ch.5
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 22:43:59 GMT -5
While everybody was resting up a bit from that previous encounter Ann, Sophie, and Zack went off to the side to chat among themselves.
"So where are you from Zack?" Ann asked.
Zack looked liked he was deep in thought about his response until he responded with, "no where's in particular,". Zack told Ann.
"What kind of lame ass response is that?" Ann said to Zack.
"Like I said I don't have a home I just go where the wind takes me," Zack responded.
"But where were you born, where were you raised?" Ann asked.
Zack took a couple of moments to think about the response then he responded.
"I am not from the Mushroom Kingdom but as far as where I actually came from that I can't tell you," Zack said as walking away from Ann.
"Wait wait oh dam," Ann called out as she sighed at Zack leaving. "Wait Zack isn't from the Mushroom Kingdom, does that mean he's like me and Sophie?" Ann thought to herself. "Wait he could have been from my home world," Ann thought as she made her way back to the main party.
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"Hey Zack you have a few minutes?" Sophie asked Zack.
"Yes but make it quick," Zack said to Sophie.
"I would like to thank you again for your help earlier today," Sophie said.
"......" Zack said just staring towards the ceiling.
"Really you are that upset about having to save us, fine I was just trying to be nice," Sophie huffed towards Zack.
"This isn't easy for me but I should be thanking you,"Zack blurted out while blushing.
"Why what did I do?" Sophie asked looking at Zack confused.
"You and Ann risked your lives to save me even though I was just some stranger," Zack said completely flustered.
"Oh that, well that was nothing, you see Ms. Rosalina taught us that it's important to help those in need just like she helped us, on that fateful day two years ago," Sophie told Zack.
"What happened?" Zack asked interested in Sophie's response.
"Well I could tell you now, or we can do it over a friendly duel when this mission is over?" Sophie told Zack as she flew away.
"Why do I get the feeling this was one big set up to get me to have a duel with her?" Zack sighed making his way to the group.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 22:51:00 GMT -5
Location.... Bowser's Courtyard
Besides the thunder which could be held roaring in the background as our hero's entered the courtyard was completely silent. As far as the hero's could tell there were no goombas, Koopas, any of Bowser's minions in sight. "Am I the only one who's spooked by how quiet it is?" Starlow asked.
"Yeah it's to silent, wonder what Bowser has planned?" Sophie wondered.
As everyone was wondering what was going on, Flan noticed a shadow amongst the sky. "Ann Fletching Fletching, I mean I saw something," Flan told Ann in a panic.
"I am sure it was just lighting Flan," Ann told Flan in a dismissive manner. Flan was about to calm down when the shadow got bigger and longer before disappearing.
"Ann I Fletching it again it seemed like it got bigger," Flan said to Ann freaking out. "Flan are you okay if I didn't know any better its almost like you saw a ......," Ann didn't get a chance to finish as a loud crashing sound caught everyone's attention.
"What is that?" Starlow asked as everybody was staring at what looked liked a mechanical dragon.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 22:57:42 GMT -5
"Beep beep bop bop, intruders not lord Bowser or loser minions," the dragon said.
"Who are you?" Sophie asked.
"I am Error.... Fracktail," Fracktail said.
"Okay Fracktail what are you doing here?" Rosalina asked.
"You are to report directly to jail don't pass go, don't collect $200," Fracktail said. "..... I am security for Bowser," Fracktail reiterated.
"Okay what are you guarding?" Sophie asked. "Information forbidden, you have to face me, need to save game first, too late you didn't save and now red ring of death," Fracktail said as he took to the sky.
"Well looks like we have to um take on this interesting form of security," Rosalina said as everybody readied their weapons.
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 23:00:49 GMT -5
But for now it is time. It is time for the bump that seems like a rouge on the outside but has a heart of gold underneath that rough extior. Info Bump (rock head side to side) INFO BUMP Today's guest is the mother of Lumas herself Rosalina Name; Rosalina Gender; Female Ocupation; Galaxy Goddess/ Guardian Age;  ? But she looks like shes in her early to mid 20's Likes; Her children the Lumas, relaxing, telling stories, hanging with her friends Dislikes; Bitter stuff, anyone who would harm her friends, being alone Personality; Kind hearted, Sweet, Motherly, Stern, Prptective, Bio; Rosalinas story begins when a little girl whos favorite hobby was observing the stars had a fateful encounter with a Luma. The Luma told the little girl it was looking for its mother. Because apparently when you are a child in the Mario universe you just know how to fix and operate a spaceship but nevertheless Rosalina offered to help the Luma. So the two worked tirelessly growing close in the process until one day they got the spaceship opperational. Rosalina offered to join the Luma not just to find its mom but maybe find her own mom who Rosalina believed was in the stars. After much traveling they would find the Lumas mom in the shape of a comet. The Luma was so happy and luckily for them tools and furniture just happened to be frozen inside the comet. So Rosalina built a makeshift home and before she knew it hundreds and hundreds of Lumas would find her house and they would come to call her mother. Unfortunately for Rosalina she was never able to find her mom and she started tearing up. The original Luma that has been with her sensed her sadness and he transformed. The other Lumas were impressed and that's when they told her that the Lumas are baby space objects. Some are destined to become planets, some are destined to become comets, etc. Rosalina looked upon her numerous children and she agreed to stay with them but she would like to visit Earth one every hundred years. Now as far as her role in the story. She is a de facto older sister to everyone of the group. She is very protective of Sophie and Ann who are like her younger sisters. Rosalina is always their to sooth the girls sorrow with kind and sweet words, or there to kick in the rear when they need it |
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Post by Deleted on May 5, 2016 23:07:56 GMT -5
Gather around guys I have a plan," Sophie said to the group. "You see that ball thing on top of his head, I have a gut feeling, that's his weakness," Sophie said.
"So what's the plan?" Ann asked.
"Well I can only carry one person at a time," Sophie told the group. "So Ann and Rosalina keep that thing busy with your spells," Sophie told Ann and Rosalina. "Zack your coming with me," Sophie told Zack. "Donkey Kong, I need you to attack that thing Zack I need you to hit that ball on top of his head so we can see if its really more effective," Sophie told Zack and DK. With those words everyone took position and ready themselves for battle.
"Doesn't compute, lifeforms not bothering to move or defend," Fracktail said.
"Okay now," Sophie said as everyone took position. Ann and Rosalina were the first to attack unleashing a combo of Shine and Lighting towards the mechanical dragon.
"Lighting error, trying to override, error," Fracktail said. Donkey Kong was the next person to attack Fracktail as he stabbed Fracktail with his lance. While Donkey Kong was busy attacking Fracktail, Sophie grabbed Zack and lifted him onto Fracktail's back. When Zack landed on his back, he rushed for the ball on top of Frack tails head.
"Error, enemy found weak point, must do a barrel roll to avoid incoming fire," Fracktail said as he began to do a barrel roll to try to get Zack off his back.
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Post by Deleted on May 6, 2016 18:12:28 GMT -5
Zack was able to hold on to Fracktail during the barrel roll and stayed on top of his back. "Peppy protocol complete barrel roll was successful," Fracktail said unaware Zack was still on his back. "Intonate Ramming protocol, target Peach with blue dress," Fracktail said as he rammed Rosalina. "That hurt," Rosalina said brushing herself off.
"Hold still Rosalina," Ann said as she healed Rosalina.
"I am fine thanks, but he isn't," Rosalina said unleashing another lighting spell.
"Thunder is super effective," Fracktail let out. Sophie grabbed Donkey Kong and dropped him on his back. Zack and DK both unleashed a pair of attacks on the ball on top of his head."Intonate, peppy protocol do a barrel roll," Fracktail said as he did another barrel roll. DK was able to hold on but Zack was unable to get a good hold of Fracktail and he fell to the ground below. "Ouch you stupid dragon, you will pay for that," Zack let out. "Fracktail uses tackle attack on pidgey," Fracktail said as he attacked Sophie.
Sophie picked herself up and Zack as she dropped Zack onto Fracktail's back. While Sophie was ferrying Zack onto Fracktail's back, Fracktail trying going for Sophie again but a lance to head throw off his aiming hitting Zack instead. Ann and Rosalina unleashed another shining lighting attack towards Fracktail, while Zack finished up by attacking Fracktail. "Not good systems experiencing damage, error, error," Fracktail said in a panic.
Fracktail tried his best to shake off DK and Zack but they held on and remained on his back. Zack and DK both attacked the top of Fracktail's head as he let out a scream in intense pain.
"Now Rosalina and Ann let's finish this off," Sophie said. Rosalina and Ann channeled their magic towards Sophie's bow, then Sophie let loose a magic infused arrow right towards Fracktail.
"The system error, error, I am having a bad fur day, I think I shall conker out," Fracktail said as then he shut down. DK grabbed Zack and hopped off the dragons back right before he blew up in a mini explosion.
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Post by Deleted on May 6, 2016 18:15:16 GMT -5
So is everybody okay?" Rosalina asked. "Yeah we're fine," everyone answered.
"That thing scared the Fletching out of me," Flan said.
"Well its over little buddy glad to see your safe," Ann said.
"Mama.......said......hide.......with.......Starlow........and.......Flan," Prince Luma said as he made his way over with Starlow.
"Glad to see everybody is safe," Rosalina said. "So now we know that our objective lies behind those doors," Sophie said.
"Well we do have enough time to do one other thing, just keep in mind we may not be back," Rosalina said.
"So I think we should go to the treasure room," Sophie said.
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Post by Deleted on May 6, 2016 19:38:18 GMT -5
Well while we are here I guess it can't hurt to take a look at his treasure room while we are here," Sophie said.
"Yay your are the greatest," Ann said letting out a squeal of joy and proceed to tackle Sophie to the ground.
"Sigh, I do have to admit though any treasure we take from him means its something he doesn't have later to use against us," Rosalina said.
"Hmm maybe there is a new sword in there for me,
I guess a few coins couldn't hurt either," Zack said. "Wow can't believe Mr oh so serouis actually wants to go to the treasure room," Ann chided Zack.
(Are we going or are we going to stand around and talk about it?), Donkey Kong grunted.
Sophie and the group made their way through the lobby and decided to take a left and head towards Bowser's treasure room. "I can't wait to see what he has," Ann said gitty with excitement.
"Geez such an Anna," Sophie sighed while shr facepalmed.
"Yeah, yeah whatever," Ann retorted Sophie.
"Hey girls I am sorry to bust your bubbles but it looks like somebody already beat us here," Rosalina said.
"Aww," Ann pouted.
"Hey looks like some stuff is left though," Zack said. "Well better then nothing, right Ann," Sophie told Ann in a comforting matter.
"I was going to be wealthy, retire early, make a killing selling some of the stuff," Ann sniffed. Rosalina opened the door as the group proceeded to enter the treasure room of Bowser's Castle.
"Well at least there are some stuff left," Sophie said.
"Hey they are seals over there," Ann said while she had some second seals and master seals in her hand.
"I found interesting artifacts over here," Rosalina said as she had some interesting items in hand.
"Wow even when Bowser gets looted he still has a mini fortune left," Zack said staring at the pile of coins in front of him.
"(Hey I found something very interesting, come quickly,) Donkey Kong said as he pointed to a beautiful bow in the corner.
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? But she looks like shes in her early to mid 20's